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Alex and Dalex (Art Trade) Classy Killers by RunnerGuitar Alex and Dalex (Art Trade) Classy Killers by RunnerGuitar
My Art trade with :iconangelicdisgrace42: Her OC's Alex and Dalex, i don't know much about them except that they are a pair of good looking twins, I just pictured them as teenaged James Bonds. I hope you like it!

I don't owe the Characters! They belong to AngelicDisgrace42
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Hello,I'm here to give a critique!

So lets start ;D

Good Things - I Liked the way you drew the bodies,i'm not sure if to call it anatomy or not ^^; i like the way you colored the eyes too,And their shirt for some reason ;p

Bad things -
First thing i noticed,the shape of the face is a little odd.

-Maybe you should make it more round,especially around the ear,it looks like the face goes especially up for the ear.

the second thing i noticed,is their legs,one leg is okay and the other doesn't look like a leg at all,more like an ellipse(?) colored.

-I Don't really know how to fix that,to be honest i'm not good with legs ^^; but i suggest you make it on the floor like the other leg,it looks a little to big.


:bulletyellow: Also,i really like your coloring but i suggest you work on your technique more
(for example,shade the pockets or their knee lines,or shade a couple of times(?) etc)

And i think you should experiment with the background too,maybe a few clouds?~


Originality - Well,their designs are rather simple,but really nice.

Technique - Like i said before,your technique is nice but there is always room for improvement~you should try to experiment with it.


That's it!
Hope it helped you ;]
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Paper-Neko Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ooh this is cool! :D The way you coloured the eyes creates an interesting effect *o*
RunnerGuitar Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks :D Glad you like it! I'm sorry I'm taking so long with your part of the art trade ;w; Gomene
Paper-Neko Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You're welcome x3
Ahaha that's okay! Take your time, you seem really busy :>
RunnerGuitar Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Gomene ;w; But I'm still not to your level DX I wanna be as good as you!
AngelicDisgrace42 Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012
Love the colors ^^ Awesome :3
RunnerGuitar Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Glad you like it :D It wasn't easy I can tell you that XD
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