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Her OC's Alex and Dalex, i don't know much about them except that they are a pair of good looking twins, I just pictured them as teenaged James Bonds. I hope you like it! 
Glad you like it! I'm sorry I'm taking so long with your part of the art trade ;w; Gomene
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So lets start ;D
Good Things - I Liked the way you drew the bodies,i'm not sure if to call it anatomy or not
Bad things -
First thing i noticed,the shape of the face is a little odd.
-Maybe you should make it more round,especially around the ear,it looks like the face goes especially up for the ear.
the second thing i noticed,is their legs,one leg is okay and the other doesn't look like a leg at all,more like an ellipse(?) colored.
-I Don't really know how to fix that,to be honest i'm not good with legs
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(for example,shade the pockets or their knee lines,or shade a couple of times(?) etc)
And i think you should experiment with the background too,maybe a few clouds?~
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Originality - Well,their designs are rather simple,but really nice.
Technique - Like i said before,your technique is nice but there is always room for improvement~you should try to experiment with it.
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That's it!
Hope it helped you ;]
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