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Disappearence of Miku Hatsune (Complete Body)

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Miku is done! Now time to finish the first part of the Dissapearance series! I hope you like it! I'm proud of how it came out, I may later try using the SAI thing everybody uses
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HP
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HP pst_p04a
Date Taken
Sep 5, 2012, 7:23:31 PM
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Hey I hope you don't mind if i gave you a few drawing pointers? Sorry if this comes across as rude or anything. I know this picture's a few days old but anyway lets start.
Ok lets start at the top.

:bulletblue:Your hair isn't too bad you have the right idea going on here. Hair should "fall" down. Your hair seams to be sticking out you know like its been back combed. Hair obeys gravity like everything else unless hairspray and backcombing is involved. Miku's hair is fairly hard to get right but with a few good ref's hair won't be a problem.

:bulletblue: Ok moving on to the arm. Now first of all your arm is too far down the body. The shoulder should be on the same line so to say as the neck. Now your arm is also too long. Remember that your hands just roughly reach halfway down the thighs.

:bulletblue: And Finally the shoes. Now feet are a pain in the ass to draw but try to get the shoes the same "Shape" as feet should be. If you can't get one shoe the same as the first one photoshop and sai have copy and paste.

other than those few anatomy errors everything else is good.

Again I am so sorry if I come off as rude. I hope that at least helps a little :D